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@@ -6,10 +6,7 @@ description: Embed the Data Controller editor inside a SAS VA report as a data-d
 
 # Embedding inside SAS Visual Analytics
 
-Data Controller can be embedded inside a SAS Visual Analytics report as a
-**data-driven content** (DDC) object.  This unlocks scenarios where a user
-selects a row in a VA visualisation and is immediately able to edit the
-corresponding row(s) in a SAS table - all from inside the same report.
+Data Controller can be embedded inside a SAS Visual Analytics report as a **data-driven content** (DDC) object.  This unlocks scenarios where a user can safely modify the values in an underlying SAS table, and have the visualisation updated- all from inside the same report.
 
 ## URL
 
@@ -31,19 +28,13 @@ The `?embed=` parameter accepts three values:
 
 ## How VA drives the editor
 
-VA pushes a JSON payload to the iframe via `window.postMessage` whenever the
-selected rows change.  Data Controller listens for these messages and:
+VA pushes a JSON payload to the iframe via `window.postMessage` whenever the selected rows change.  Data Controller listens for these messages and:
 
 1. Resolves each VA `parameter` to a DC column by matching on column label.
-2. Builds a filter (using existing [Filter](/filter/) machinery) over the
-   selected primary-key values.
-3. Hides any VA columns marked as `brush` so the grid stays focused on the
-   user-editable columns (except primary key cols which are always shown)
-4. Navigates to `/editor/<table>/<FILTER_RK>?embed=va` so the filtered view is
-   shareable and survives reloads.
+2. Builds a filter (using existing [Filter](/filter/) machinery) over the selected values.
+3. Hides any VA columns marked as `brush` so the grid stays focused on the user-editable columns (except primary key cols which are always shown)
 
-If VA sends an empty / unmatched message the editor falls back to the unfiltered
-view but stays in VA mode.
+If VA sends an empty / unmatched message the editor falls back to the unfiltered view but stays in VA mode.
 
 ## Security
 
@@ -53,6 +44,4 @@ https://git.datacontroller.io/dc/dc/src/branch/main/client/src/app/services/va-m
 
 ## Configuration in VA
 
-In the VA Report Designer, add a **Data-Driven Content** object and set the URL
-to the editor route shown above.  Map the report data items so they include the
-primary key column(s) of the target DC table.
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+In the VA Report Designer, add a **Data-Driven Content** object and set the URL to the editor route shown above.  Be sure that any report level parameters are added to the DDC object itself.
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