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 ## What This Means for You
 
-If your organisation stores data in Snowflake, you can now:
+If your organisation stores data in [Snowflake](https://www.linkedin.com/company/snowflake-computing/), you can now:
 
 - **Edit** Snowflake table data through the familiar Data Controller interface
 - **Submit** changes for review and approval before they are applied
 - **Audit** every change with a complete, tamper-evident history
 
-No more uncontrolled spreadsheet uploads or direct database edits — every modification goes through the same governed process you rely on for your SAS datasets.
+Say goodbye to uncontrolled spreadsheet uploads and ad-hoc database edits. Every Snowflake modification now flows through the same robust approval process that governs the rest of your Data Controller tables.
 
 ## Implementation Details